A young man in his late teens, who is very bold.A man in his fifties, who is very manipulative.The story begins in an aeroplane.A family celebrates a homecoming.It's a story about betrayal.Your character discovers some unpleasant truths
Betrayal
Marco, a teen boy, 18 years old, was returning home after his
language trip to Spain. While flying in the plane, he was very busy thinking. The
thing is his father really irritated him by making everyone behave as he
wished. If not, the quarrels were inevitable. How to get out of his control?
That was only Marco who had already durst to tell him to stop his attempts to be
so control-addictive. Besides, today was a day of family reunion, and his
tricks would extend on every member of his family.
While coming to his house and imagining his mother’s joy of his returning Marco
noticed the well-known man in his fifties with unknown woman in her twenties.
His father was kissing this woman with all his passion not suspecting his own
son was observing his betrayal. Nevertheless, Marco was releived; maybe his dad
was going to move out as life with him was a hell for everybody.
During the celebration of his
homecoming Marco was looking at his father with scornful look as his unloyal
parent was showing no sign of shame and remorse. But eventually his patience
came to an end and he accused his father of infidelty. Being confirmed
manipulator, his father in his turn accused Marco of demanding too much attention. Marco had discovered that he was an egoist who never cared for
someone but himself, who detested his father with all his heart (what was true,
honestly), but his father provided his ungrateful son with all things
necessary. Whose money was paid for his language trip? No one stood up for
Marco, intimadated by the father’s rage. So Marco just went to his room cursing
his father and thinking about homeescaping
*Whily (Sp) flying *in (PREP)+ ART *plain (Sp)
ОтветитьУдалить"a plain" is a flat surface. What you meant is a vehicle used to travel by air, which is spelt differently.
had already *dare (WF) to tell him
During ART celebration of his homecoming
demanding too ***many (WF) attention
move out as life with him was *the (ART) hell for everybody
who detest his father: WT > the story is in the past
THank you for corrections
УдалитьPolina,
ОтветитьУдалитьwhat do you think about this task of creating your own story using the story plot generator? Did you learn something useful from this experience?
It was really exciting. Although I didn't learn any new from this experience as I have practiced writing small stories early, thank you for letting me participate in this activity
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