вторник, 7 мая 2019 г.

A young man in his late teens, who is very bold.A man in his fifties, who is very manipulative.The story begins in an aeroplane.A family celebrates a homecoming.It's a story about betrayal.Your character discovers some unpleasant truths

Betrayal

Marco, a teen boy, 18 years old,  was returning home after his language trip to Spain. While flying in the plane, he was very busy thinking. The thing is his father really irritated him by making everyone behave as he wished. If not, the quarrels were inevitable. How to get out of his control? That was only Marco who had already durst to tell him to stop his attempts to be so control-addictive. Besides, today was a day of family reunion, and his tricks would extend on every member of his family.
While coming to his house and imagining his mother’s joy of his returning Marco noticed the well-known man in his fifties with unknown woman in her twenties. His father was kissing this woman with all his passion not suspecting his own son was observing his betrayal. Nevertheless, Marco was releived; maybe his dad was going to move out as life with him was a hell for everybody.
         During the celebration of his homecoming Marco was looking at his father with scornful look as his unloyal parent was showing no sign of shame and remorse. But eventually his patience came to an end and he accused his father of infidelty. Being confirmed manipulator, his father in his turn accused Marco of demanding too much attention. Marco had discovered that he was an egoist who never cared for someone but himself, who detested his father with all his heart (what was true, honestly), but his father provided his ungrateful son with all things necessary. Whose money was paid for his language trip? No one stood up for Marco, intimadated by the father’s rage. So Marco just went to his room cursing his father and thinking about homeescaping

4 комментария:

  1. *Whily (Sp) flying *in (PREP)+ ART *plain (Sp)
    "a plain" is a flat surface. What you meant is a vehicle used to travel by air, which is spelt differently.

    had already *dare (WF) to tell him
    During ART celebration of his homecoming
    demanding too ***many (WF) attention
    move out as life with him was *the (ART) hell for everybody
    who detest his father: WT > the story is in the past

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  2. Polina,

    what do you think about this task of creating your own story using the story plot generator? Did you learn something useful from this experience?

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    1. It was really exciting. Although I didn't learn any new from this experience as I have practiced writing small stories early, thank you for letting me participate in this activity

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