What are Advantages and Disadvantages of the Second Amendment in the USA Constitution?
The constitutional right of American people to freely
keep and bear arms is an issue which frequently generate a great deal of heated
debate, with supporters maintaining that it is vital to keep USA citizens’
lives safe, whilst opponents claim that it is unjustifiable fact of
permissiveness that is unnecessary in modern society.
Firstly, it is said that some kind of a weapon is
indispensable in case of out of sudden sexual or bodily attack or pickpocketing
A right to defend oneself is an essential part of a democracy which is so
appreciated in the USA and its abolition will give rise to riots,
demonstrations and promote inner instability. This fact is important to
remember especially if we look at the statistic: it says that since the
beginning of the century the approval of this right has risen from 29 % to 51%
among American citizens. On the other hand, amendment that includes this right
was passed in the 18th century when soldiers tended to invade houses of
civilians creating difficulties for a peaceful existence. That time it was out
of sheer necessity to invent some way to defense oneself. But present-day arm’s
availability from time to time results in aggressive and blood-thirsty mass shootings
at public places committed by mental-disabled people who, in spite of their
disease, are free to buy a weapon, unfortunately. Even teenagers are able to
get it. As it is stated in the article by Jamiles Lartney “This year has been
by far the worst on record for gun violence in schools, the advocacy group
Sandy Hook Promise said, citing research by the US Naval Postgraduate School
(NPS). They counted 94 school shooting incidents in 2018, a near 60% increase
on the previous high, 59, an unwanted record set in 2006” (1).
Secondly, it is believed that permitted arm’s bearing helps
to decline a crime rate as portentous felons are afraid of being suffered
themselves. According to different statistics, above 60 % of ones who possess a
weapon have bought it for the sake of their own protection. There is even a
proverb appeared recently: “The best protection from a bad man with gun is a
good man with gun”. Besides, ones who stand for this idea respond to opponents
who criticize them for promoting gun abuse with the reasonable words if a
delinquent is a decisive one, he will definitely find a way to commit a crime
whether using a cold steel or acting with his own hands. So, abolition will not
help to improve sad statistics about the number of crimes. However, gun abuse cannot
be ignored as it has reached extremes that can no longer be tolerated. In fact, figures are appalling: 100 Americans
are killed and 200 injured by firearms each day. What is more, it is impossible
to monitor if a person has bought an arm for his defense or for a public
massacre as there are 300 million of guns in legal possession of American
people, among them are teenagers and unrecognized lunatics.
All thing considered, it may be concluded that gun
control is one of the main USA problems these days which requires a resolution.
While, free arm keeping and bearing are still permitted at the State level, the
citizens who have suffered from its negative consequences are calling for its
immediate abolition. To my mind, gun ban is vitally necessary for American
society because it is hard to read without tears these words of one mother
whose son has been assassinated: “I want those bastards in Congress … They need
to pass gun control so no one else has a child that doesn’t come home,” (2).
(1) Lartey, Jamiles.
“2018 Is Worst Year on Record for Gun Violence in Schools, Data Shows.” The
Guardian, Guardian News and Media, 9 Dec. 2018,
www.theguardian.com/us-news/2018/dec/09/sandy-hook-promise-gun-violence-school-shooting-report-2018.
(2) Davis, Charles.
“'Those Bastards Need to Pass Gun Control': Families of California Shooting
Victims Speak Out.” The Guardian, Guardian News and Media, 9 Nov. 2018,
www.theguardian.com/us-news/2018/nov/09/california-thousand-oaks-shooting-victims-las-vegas.

Polina,
ОтветитьУдалитьit's clear that you worked hard on drafting this essay. You have managed to write it in a rather clear and logical way, with suitable examples and evidence supporting your arguments. I think it's rather persuasive in describing the situation with gun control in the USA. I just thought that it'd be interesting to compare the situation there and in Russia. But this is smth to discuss in another essay.
Here are some things to consider
Information sources:
A.A right to defend oneself is an essential part of a democracy which is so appreciated in the USA and its abolition will give rise to riots, demonstrations and promote inner instability What is the source of this information: have you written it based on your reading? If yes, a reference is necessary.
B. Besides, ones who stand for this idea respond to opponents who criticize them for promoting gun abuse with the reasonable words if a delinquent is a decisive one, he will definitely find a way to commit a crime whether using a cold steel or acting with his own hands.
look at the **statistic (WF): check the differecne b/w "statistic" and "statistics"
issue which frequently *generate (WF)
with supporters maintaining that it is vital to keep USA citizens’ lives safe, whilst opponents claim that: parallel structures should be used, for example, maintaining ... claiming
some kind of a weapon is indispensable in case of ***out (?) of sudden sexual or ***bodily attack (WComb: google it to check)
***A (art) right to defend
to ***decline (WW) **a (ART) crime rate
It's great you have used this proverb for support; only the definite article is necessary with the Ns here
All ***thing (Num) considered
gun ban (WF) > gun banning
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Check this resource to learn about the difference b/w "statistic" and "statistics" https://www.quora.com/Whats-the-difference-between-a-statistic-and-Statistics
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